Get Expert Feedback from Literary Agents on Your Manuscript

Want to make your manuscript stand out?

Get direct feedback from seasoned literary agents who know what publishers and readers are looking for. Whether you’re preparing to query or refining your draft, this one-on-one consultation will help you take your book to the next level.

What’s Included?

Manuscript Review – Submit up to 25 double-spaced pages for an in-depth critique.
Live 30-Minute Zoom Call – Discuss your manuscript with a professional literary agent and receive actionable feedback.
Meaningful Insights – Get expert advice on storytelling, pacing, character development, and marketability.
Next Steps for Success – Leave with a clear plan to strengthen your book and move forward confidently.

Why Book a Literary Consultation?

✔ Industry Expertise – Learn what agents and publishers look for in a manuscript.
✔ Personalized Feedback – Get tailored advice specific to your book’s strengths and areas for improvement.
✔ Actionable Guidance – Walk away with a clear revision plan and next steps.

Investment: $199

How It Works

1️⃣ Add to cart and purchase. Download the submission instructions once purchased.
2️⃣ Submit Your Pages – Send up to 25 double-spaced pages before your session. We'll reach out to you within 24-48 hours to schedule your meeting.
3️⃣ Get Expert Feedback – Meet one-on-one via Zoom for a 30-minute in-depth discussion.
4️⃣ Refine & Improve – Use the feedback to strengthen your manuscript and move forward with confidence.

Official Bio

Kathryn Willms is a literary agent at The Rights Factory representing mainly big-idea nonfiction books. She loves working with writers on ambitious, unconventional, and smart book projects that teach us something new or change the way we see ourselves and the world. Kathryn’s projects for the agency have been in various categories including cookbook, memoir, culture, lifestyle, and women’s issues. She’s also actively acquiring science, nature/environment topics, and narrative nonfiction.

She’s drawn to works rooted in expertise that have a strong narrative voice and sense of humour. In her non-agenting life, she runs Kwill Communications, providing editing, writing, and project management in the educational field. Kathryn started her career in publishing working as an editor for Colborne Communications, where she eventually became VP. She was also the hybrid publisher of Iguana Books. In all her work, she’s inspired by the power of writing to transform, transport, enlighten, and entertain. Originally from BC, Kathryn holds a MA for the University of Calgary, and currently lives in Toronto.

Best fit: All memoir and non-fiction (e.g., science, nature/environment topics, narrative nonfiction, cookbook, culture, lifestyle, women’s issues)