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Get Expert Feedback from Literary Agents on Your Manuscript

Want to make your manuscript stand out?

 

Get direct feedback from seasoned literary agents who know what publishers and readers are looking for. Whether you’re preparing to query or refining your draft, this one-on-one consultation will help you take your book to the next level.

What’s Included?

  • Manuscript Review – Submit up to 25 double-spaced pages for an in-depth critique.

  • Live 30-Minute Zoom Call – Discuss your manuscript with a professional literary agent and receive actionable feedback.

  • Meaningful Insights – Get expert advice on storytelling, pacing, character development, and marketability.

  • Next Steps for Success – Leave with a clear plan to strengthen your book and move forward confidently.

Why Book a Literary Consultation?

 Industry Expertise – Learn what agents and publishers look for in a manuscript.
✔ Personalized Feedback – Get tailored advice specific to your book’s strengths and areas for improvement.
✔ Actionable Guidance – Walk away with a clear revision plan and next steps.

Investment: $199

How It Works

1️⃣ Add to cart and purchase. Download the submission instructions once purchased.
2️⃣ Submit Your Pages – Send up to 25 double-spaced pages before your session. We'll reach out to you within 24-48 hours to schedule your meeting.
3️⃣ Get Expert Feedback – Meet one-on-one via Zoom for a 30-minute in-depth discussion.
4️⃣ Refine & Improve – Use the feedback to strengthen your manuscript and move forward with confidence.

Official Bio

JES TRUDEL is a literary agent with The Rights Factory who spent 15 years prior to that as a freelance editor and storytelling instructor. She has taught workshops to thousands of people around the world. She's been a guest presenter with SCBWI, the 12x12 Picture Book Challenge, Write For Kids, and TSNOTYAW podcast, and has contributed to BoldFace, Children's Book Insider, and the SCBWI blog. She founded WritingCommunity.ca and organizes writing-adjacent events in her local community.

Best fit: Children's literature, picture books, middle grade, and young adult

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